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Step I -- the 'Big Idea':
'Adir's spectacularly mediocre lifestyle is unsurprisingly jeopardized
when he's drafted into *nature's dumbest animal --* the military'
when he's drafted into *nature's dumbest animal -- *the military'
Step II -- Plot Outline:
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Defense (DFACP)**
\- a place of great hopes from young soldiers who will never reach the
greatness they are led to believe they deserve. (False Hope)
\* **Hutspace Base Complex-** And old place reeking of despair, and the
\* **Hutspace Base Complex- **And old place reeking of despair, and the
endgame of all hopes from previous training. (Apathy)
\* The Boroughs, Airforce HQ -- A proud place full of false substance,
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Tech School. These are satellites to their main locations.
\* Small glimpses of pre-draft life.
***1. Defense Force Academy of Computer Professions and Cyberspace
***1****. Defense Force Academy of Computer Professions and Cyberspace
Defense***
The Naivete
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(False Hope)
***2. Hutspace Base Complex Base 108***
***2****. Hutspace Base Complex Base 108***
**Big Things** ***Are*** **Coming, Right?**
**Big Things *****Are *****Coming, Right?**
Adir is stationed in a reality unlike what he had believed, and
desperately clings to hope of his great role, despite all signs
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ suggesting otherwise.
(Apathy)
***3. The Boroughs, Air Force Headquarters***
***3****. The Boroughs, Air Force Headquarters***
Of Course I Have A Say!
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ Adir is restationed again, this time aware of the faults in his new
station -- but powerless to prevent or face them, he grows proud and
distant -- a facade that comes crashing down and leads to depression.
***4. University***
***4****. University***
It's So Nice To Feel Human Again
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ service and regains his self worth and dignity -- which leads to a
painful loss, and the conversion of depression to rage on his next
stationing.
***5. 15***^***th***^ ***AFB -Job Field Airbase***
***5. 15***^***th***^*** AFB -Job Field Airbase***
Nature's Dumbest Animal
@@ -169,8 +169,8 @@ it now, but it's okay, because afterwards he's scheduled himself to go
forth, earn lots of money, fund his Biotech degree and go about saving
the world.
Here comes the Sacred Cow, and that *'Meaningful Service'* everyone's on
about. What could go wrong?
Here comes the Sacred Cow, and that* 'Meaningful Service'* everyone's on
about. What could go wrong?* *
V. Point Of View: