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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Working Title: *The Difference Between an Idiot and a Moron*
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Step I -- the 'Big Idea':
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'Adir's spectacularly mediocre lifestyle is unsurprisingly jeopardized
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when he's drafted into *nature's dumbest animal --* the military'
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when he's drafted into *nature's dumbest animal -- *the military'
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Step II -- Plot Outline:
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@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Defense (DFACP)**
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\- a place of great hopes from young soldiers who will never reach the
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greatness they are led to believe they deserve. (False Hope)
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\* **Hutspace Base Complex-** And old place reeking of despair, and the
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\* **Hutspace Base Complex- **And old place reeking of despair, and the
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endgame of all hopes from previous training. (Apathy)
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\* The Boroughs, Airforce HQ -- A proud place full of false substance,
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@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Tech School. These are satellites to their main locations.
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\* Small glimpses of pre-draft life.
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***1. Defense Force Academy of Computer Professions and Cyberspace
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***1****. Defense Force Academy of Computer Professions and Cyberspace
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Defense***
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The Naivete
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@@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ agonizes over.
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(False Hope)
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***2. Hutspace Base Complex Base 108***
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***2****. Hutspace Base Complex Base 108***
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**Big Things** ***Are*** **Coming, Right?**
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**Big Things *****Are *****Coming, Right?**
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Adir is stationed in a reality unlike what he had believed, and
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desperately clings to hope of his great role, despite all signs
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(Apathy)
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***3. The Boroughs, Air Force Headquarters***
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***3****. The Boroughs, Air Force Headquarters***
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Of Course I Have A Say!
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@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ Adir is restationed again, this time aware of the faults in his new
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station -- but powerless to prevent or face them, he grows proud and
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distant -- a facade that comes crashing down and leads to depression.
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***4. University***
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***4****. University***
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It's So Nice To Feel Human Again
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@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ service and regains his self worth and dignity -- which leads to a
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painful loss, and the conversion of depression to rage on his next
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stationing.
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***5. 15***^***th***^ ***AFB -Job Field Airbase***
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***5. 15***^***th***^*** AFB -Job Field Airbase***
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Nature's Dumbest Animal
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@@ -169,8 +169,8 @@ it now, but it's okay, because afterwards he's scheduled himself to go
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forth, earn lots of money, fund his Biotech degree and go about saving
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the world.
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Here comes the Sacred Cow, and that *'Meaningful Service'* everyone's on
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about. What could go wrong?
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Here comes the Sacred Cow, and that* 'Meaningful Service'* everyone's on
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about. What could go wrong?* *
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V. Point Of View:
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